So avoid using the word ‘very’ because it’s lazy. A man is not very tired, he is exhausted. Don’t use very sad, use morose. Language was invented for one reason, boys - to woo women - and, in that endeavor, laziness will not do.
To be clear is the first duty of a writer; to charm and to please are graces to be acquired later.
My name is Any Syler. I am 21 years old. Female.
I was born and raised in Southern California. I grew bored of LA, so I moved to Seattle for my higher education. I spend my breaks back in LA.
I am a Creative Writing major with a great love of History and Art.
I love swimming, reading, and bitching.
Let's be friends.
Check out my writing blog, Atlantis Practice
